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Saturday Scribes Writing Prompts: March 16

Posted on March 15th, 2010 by desert rat
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Saturday Scribes Weekly Writing Prompts

Theme: Penultimate

Words/Phrases:
green
full
swimming
traces

Sorry it’s late this week, life got in the way. This will be the second-last Sat. Scribes post for the forseeable future. After next week’s, the writing prompts will be going on hiatus for a while. You can, as always, feel free to use any of the old prompts (from this site or the old Scribes site) if you need that extra little bit of inpiration to get you going.

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Saturday Scribes Writing Prompts: March 6

Posted on March 6th, 2010 by desert rat
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Saturday Scribes Weekly Writing Prompts

Theme: Impossible Things

Words/Phrases:
rolling
expanse
discover
condemned

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Saturday Scribes Writing Prompts: Feb. 26

Posted on February 26th, 2010 by desert rat
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Saturday Scribes Weekly Writing Prompts

Theme: Extraordinary

Words/Phrases:
Torch
Barrows
Helpless
Beyond

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Saturday Scribes Writing Prompts: Feb. 5

Posted on February 5th, 2010 by desert rat
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Saturday Scribes Weekly Writing Prompts

Theme: Abandoned

Words/Phrases:
quintessential
gin
tower
release

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Saturday Scribes Writing Prompts: Jan. 22

Posted on January 23rd, 2010 by desert rat
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Saturday Scribes Weekly Writing Prompts

Theme: A matter of time

Words/Phrases:
genius
viral
raincoat

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Saturday Scribes Writing Prompts: Jan. 16

Posted on January 16th, 2010 by desert rat
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Saturday Scribes Weekly Writing Prompts

Theme: Change of plans

Words/Phrases:
church
exploding
sinister

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Choice

Posted on September 24th, 2009 by desert rat
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Since I haven’t written a piece for Saturday Scribes in a while, I thought I’d browse through the prompts from the last few months and see what tweaked my fancy. The result is a series of freefall flash-fiction pieces, that unite to make a five-part story arch. Covers most of the theme and word prompts from June 12 through Sept. 25 of this year.

“It is what we make out of what we have, not what we are given, that separates one person from another.”
- Nelson Mandela

I.
Trapped

Mistaken for dead, they carried him to a stone room, the room where his brother lay.  Seven years since the fall, when feathers had drifted like snow, and silver blood pooled like mercury on the frozen ground.  Measuring the hours by the frequency of the static on the radio, the day by the twining of the vines that grew from the bodies, how long it took for the red flowers to open.  When the pollen broke free and drifted up into the night sky, bright motes of dust turning to stars, he would know a year had passed.  And so it went.

II.
Adaptation

Winter came, a shock of snow on the trees, white against unseasonable green.  Darkness had become habitual, and so the light blinded him at first.  There was a hint of sweet decay in the air.  He thought of blankets of leaves settling after the rain.  There had been fingernail scratches in the stone, shining blue-white against the black.  He’d been given a watch as a child, its letters bright green in the unlit bedroom.  For a long time, he believed anything that glowed was radioactive, and had the potential to bestow superpowers.  He also knew these things could only happen by accident.  And so he willed himself to forget what he knew.  It was, he reflected, the only reason he was standing here now, blinking and shading his eyes against the glare.  To return to the living world, one need only forget that one is dead. 

III.
Rejection

Like most of her kind, she could not remember being born.  Her first memory was of floating, suspended on the wind, surrounded by winking sparks.  Their rising action guided, not by physics, but by something else – something that had dipped its fingers in the sunspots and swirled them as one might swirl milk in coffee, something that had watched molten magma cool and solidify, had seen the first rain fall on barren land, buffeted by waves tall as mountains.  Were she anyone else, they might have called it foolish bravado, this attempt to resist what they all assumed must be an irresistible force. But she was innocent, and so when she sang herself down again, they smiled and shook their heads and said, young people these days.  She won’t last long down there, they said, all alone in an unforgiving world.  She’ll come back eventually, they said, it’s only a phase.  She could not mark the precise moment when they forgot about her, but she felt it happen.  It was some time after the first moment she set bare feet on stone.

IV.
Precarious

The watch lay where he had left it, next to the bootleg Pogues album.  Some live concert in Bristol, before it had all come apart.  The face was dark, lifeless, until he ran a sentimental finger across the scuffed glass, leaving a smear of brightness that faded like fogged breath on a window.  Before the fall, the sight of a naked woman strolling through the wreckage as if on a summer beach might have startled him.  He had seen many such sights since, although the shapes had often staggered and stumbled, as if half-blind.  He had thought, the first time, that the fire might have returned, that the moon might once again be reflecting the sun.  They had all left, in the end.  His brother had died, trying to follow them.  Now here she was, marching through the steel graveyard towards him, as if she knew him. She must have gotten lost, he thought, all those years ago.  Only she did not walk like someone lost.  When they finally stood face to face, he realized that he knew her after all.  Sorry I’m late, she said.  He held up the broken watch.  The way his cheeks felt, oddly stretched, he must have been smiling.  I remember now, she said, how to bring it all back.

V.

It is Saturday, and they are leaning over the wooden railing, watching children play, boats made of sticks and paper bobbing in the green water.  At the end of the boardwalk, a woman in face paint is giving out free balloons.  Is this real? he asks.  She shrugs, says, that’s up to you.  Her hand on his is warm and cold, like ice melting. The sparks from the bonfire jump and spit, like firecrackers. Above, a gull is circling, white against blue.

- T.H., Sept. 25 ‘09

7. diminished

Posted on April 8th, 2009 by desert rat
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where the hollow of her arm
once held you safe
against all
the familiar demons
where comfortable wrinkles
once nuzzled your back
the antique linen, buttercup gold
now stretched taut, iron-straight
cold as stone and empty houses
by its emptiness refines
the very idea of loneliness
we are borrowers, only
love is never ours to keep
only to brush by, with a sigh
and a wish, like an exhaled breath
in a vacant room

- T.H.

PoeFusion title prompt (diminished)
+ random words: hollow, borrow

6. lemon honey

Posted on April 5th, 2009 by desert rat
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lemon honey, and other
   bittersweet things

we welcome arrivals
with trumpets, strewn flowers,
a red carpet kicking up dust
as it unfurls down the long steps
we herald births, new beginnings
with candy, balloons, fireworks
cake so sweet it makes your teeth ache
but we seldom celebrate leavings
except clandestinely
deep in the shadowed places
of our hearts, the sharp, hard
corners, where we secretly relish
 the  wounds of our enemies
their petty losses, their private
moments of agony; it is
a fragile triumph, a filigree
of burnt sugar and clouded glass,
shattering at the merest touch
so we hold it close
to our chest, tenderly
licking our lips at the bittersweet taste
until the moment sours, dissolving
to dust and ashes in our mouths
we turn with a blossoming smile
towards the next new arrival,
the next accomplishment of strangers
while quietly wishing for the next
delicious ache, the next precious emptiness
left behind by what we once craved

- T.H.

It just occured to me that maybe I should make a brief disclaimer here.  As most writers know, a poem doesn’t necessarily reflect the poet’s state of mind at the time.  I much prefer celebrating the good parts of life, really.  This was more like one of those, state-of-the-human-condition type things.  Just in case anyone was noticing a trend in the last few poems, and starting to get a little concerned.   ;-)

Thanks to K. and S. for today’s random words. 
You can find more (maybe not-so-random) poems over at ReadWritePoem and Sunday Scribblings.

The art of lying

Posted on November 15th, 2006 by desert rat
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(For PT; I didn’t really get the prompt until I read some of the poems, and it’s amazing what comes out of it; I’ve been absolutely delighted by each and every one; I thought for sure I’d be too tired to write any more tonight, but I just had to play with this one.)

I woke up drowning yesterday
I’d gone to sleep the night before
turtle-like on the ocean floor

the fruit flies on my computer screen
know the secrets of the universe
hidden in a yellow pencil box

the harp in the corner
was built from the bones of a giant
who shrank in the wash

I woke up drowning yesterday
  – You were there -
But did you push me in
or pull me out?

I eat dandelions for breakfast,
purple tinfoil stars for desert
and patchwork frogs bring me
candied yams on fine linen

I have finished everything I started
and even some things I haven’t
my pet crocodile will swear to this
(and you can’t argue with a crocodile; they’re always right)

I woke up drowning yesterday
and someone saved me
It could have been you.

And just for the heck of it, following Dana’s prompt:

This room is somewhere else turning cartwheels
  The house has already forgotten it
The street is made of spun sugar and is always crooked
  even when you hit it with a hammer
This town has been singing up chrysanthemums out of season
The continent feels left out, and heaves a small sigh
The earth was put here to confuse everyone
  (done a smash-up job, I think)
The sky doesn’t know what it was thinking, but
  it knows which way is up
The stars are thinking it’s time they redecorated
(that wallpaper really has to go)
And the entire universe just popped like a bubble.
  (oops)

- T.H. Nov. 15 ‘06

For more thoroughly delightful “lying” poems, visit Poetry Thursday.